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Ellie, one of my 7 year old twins, loves to write. She constantly writes stories and poetry. She dreams of someday being an author. I tell her she already is. She wrote this today and I wanted to share her poem with all of you.

“Fall” by Ellie Friedman

Cider, apples

All day long,

Children happy

Singing songs,

Having fun

All day

All night

Fun in Fall

With no fright!

Her sister Jenna did this illustration in Photoshop.

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  1. Matt Friedman on October 10, 2009 at 5:06 pm

    You girls rock!

  2. Wendy Mayo on October 10, 2009 at 5:28 pm

    Wow! Such talented young ladies!

  3. Alexa on October 10, 2009 at 8:15 pm

    How cute and so sweet! And what a wonderful poem! Such a great job on both the picture and poem. Good job Ellie and Jenna!

  4. Clair on October 11, 2009 at 12:09 am

    Love the teamwork!

  5. Christy Lynn on October 11, 2009 at 8:15 am

    Wow, that’s really good. You do a great job not only inspiring us, but encouraging the creativity in your children.

  6. Shelly on October 11, 2009 at 8:31 am

    Very sweet. What a dynamic duo!!

  7. Penny on October 11, 2009 at 9:29 am

    The poem and drawing are wonderful! You have such accomplished little girls!

  8. Tanya on October 11, 2009 at 11:56 am

    This is a great poem, and I love the artwork! I think they should publish a book of children’s poetry. Ellie can write, Jenna can illustrate, and you could take a photo of them hard at work for the “about the author” page.

  9. Alexandra on October 11, 2009 at 1:03 pm

    🙂 this made me smile

  10. Donnell on October 11, 2009 at 9:05 pm

    Awesome! I see collaboration in their future!!

  11. Michelle T Gidosh on October 13, 2009 at 11:13 am

    posted about contest on FB…. thanks again…. good luck to all!

  12. alhnuf on October 13, 2009 at 12:42 pm

    Very nice . 🙂

  13. Amy H. on October 13, 2009 at 3:49 pm

    Just posted on FB! To all who win, enjoy!

  14. Olivia on October 13, 2009 at 4:35 pm

    Such smart girls!

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