ʻO ka hōʻoiaʻiʻo ʻana no nā mea paʻi kiʻi: Kahi Alakaʻi i ke kākau a me ka hōʻoia ʻana, ʻĀpana 3

No laila ʻoe kākau ʻia kahi kikoʻī. Ua loaʻa iā ʻoe hoʻoponopono hou ʻia a hoʻoponopono hou ʻia. Ua hauʻoli ʻoe i kāu hana. Makemake ʻoe e heluhelu ka honua a laila e hoʻomaka i ka hoʻouna ʻana i nā ukana aloha i kāu kuhikuhi. Mākaukau ʻoe e kaomi i ka "publish".

Akā ʻo ia maoli mākaukau e hele?

Aia ma lalo iho kekahi mau ʻōlelo aʻoaʻo e pili ana i ka mea e nānā ai i kēlā nānā hope ma mua o kou kau ʻana i kāu blog a i ʻole he mau kaukani kope i paʻi ʻia ma Kālā Inc.. Kahaha paha ʻoe i kāu mea e ʻike ai.

kali

ʻO ka mea mua, kali. Inā loaʻa iā ʻoe kekahi manawa, e waiho i kāu palapala no kahi lā, a i ʻole he pule inā hiki iā ʻoe. ʻAʻohe noʻonoʻo ʻepekema ma hope o kēia lōʻihi o ka manawa i manaʻo ʻia (inā ʻoe e noʻonoʻo nei.) ʻAʻole ia he mea koʻikoʻi maoli pehea ka lōʻihi o kou haʻalele ʻana, akā e waiho lōʻihi ʻoe a hiki i kou hoʻi ʻana i kāu kākau ʻana, ua like ia me ka heluhelu ʻana i kekahi mea. hou. ʻOi aku ka maʻalahi o ka ʻohi ʻana i nā hewa ma kahi palapala ke heluhelu ʻoe me nā maka hou. Ke heluhelu ʻoe i kāu hana ponoʻī ʻoe pinepine "heluhelu" i kāu mea makemake e kākau, ʻaʻole i ka mea maoli ma ka ʻaoʻao. ʻO ia ke kumu e maʻalahi ai ka loaʻa ʻana o nā hewa i ka palapala a nā poʻe ʻē aʻe, a no ke aha e kōkua nui ai ka hoʻoponopono ʻana i kāu hana.

Heluhelu nui

E heluhelu i kāu hana me ka leo nui, ʻoiai he ʻāpana palapala i manaʻo ʻole ʻia no ka ʻōlelo. E hoʻolohe i nā wahi o nā huaʻōlelo "hopu" i kou pepeiao. E kahaha ʻoe i ka nui o nā hoʻomaikaʻi āu e hana ai i kāu kākau ʻana ma kēia ala. Ke ʻimi nei ʻoe i ka "euphony", ʻo ia hoʻi ke kani maikaʻi kāu kākau ʻana. Ma ke kaʻina hana e hoʻomaʻamaʻa a maʻalahi hoʻi kāu kākau ʻana.

E nānā no ka ʻaelike

E hōʻoia i ka inoa a me ka huaʻōlelo ma ka huaʻōlelo "ʻae". Pono lākou e hoʻohālikelike i ka helu a me ke kanaka (e laʻa me ka mea mua "I", ke kanaka ʻekolu "ʻo ia", etc.). E kōkua kekahi mau laʻana ma aneʻi:

Aia kekahi mau mea hiki iā Jodi ke aʻo iā ʻoe e pili ana i ka hoʻohana ʻana i Photoshop. E nānā i nā ʻatikala nui ma kāna blog.
(He mau mea he plural, no laila, ʻo ka huaʻōlelo “are”. ʻAʻole pololei ka ʻōlelo ʻana “Aia kekahi mau mea…”)

Ua paʻi ʻia kahi hōʻiliʻili o nā kiʻi nani ma ke kahawai Flickr. E nānā a hoʻoikaika!
(ʻOiai he nui nā kiʻi, 'he hōʻiliʻili' hoʻokahi, no laila pono 'i ua hoopukaia'. He hewa ka ʻōlelo ʻana "Ua paʻi ʻia kahi hōʻiliʻili kiʻi…”)

E ʻoki i nā huaʻōlelo ʻē aʻe e like me kou hiki. Wehe i nā huaʻōlelo pono ʻole.

Pono e hoʻohui i kēlā me kēia huaʻōlelo i kāu palapala. Inā ʻaʻole, hele i waho! ʻo kahi laʻana:

Hiki i nā hana Photoshop ke mālama iā ʻoe i ka manawa nui i ka hoʻoponopono ʻana i kāu mau kiʻi.
Hoʻopau nā hana Photoshop i ka manawa hoʻoponopono.

He wahi nani ke awa o Sydney.
He nani ke awa o Sydney.

He wahi maikaʻi ʻo Sydney Harbour e kiʻi i nā kiʻi.
Hana ʻo Sydney Harbour i kahi kūlana maikaʻi loa.

E makaʻala no nā "qualifiers"

ʻO nā mea kūpono he mau huaʻōlelo e like me 'seem', 'sort of', 'quity', 'rether', and 'a little'. Hoʻonāwaliwali lākou i kāu kākau ʻana. Holoi iā lākou a loaʻa i kāu palapala ka mana. E nānā i kēia mau laʻana:

He mea hoʻonāukiuki paha ka loaʻa ʻana o ka lauoho hele ma ka maka o kekahi ke ʻohi ʻoe i kāu paʻi canvas nui mai ka lab.
He mea hoʻonāukiuki ke loaʻa iā ʻoe a lauoho hele hewa ma ke alo o kekahi ke ʻohi ʻoe i kāu paʻi canvas nui mai ka lab.

He ʻano ʻoluʻolu nā pūkuʻu like ʻole.
Nā pūkuʻi like ʻole uʻi.

Hōʻalo i ka huaʻōlelo 'nui'

ʻO 'Very' kahi mea hōʻailona i hoʻohana ʻia e nā mea kākau e hoʻoikaika i nā adjective nāwaliwali. ʻO ke ala ʻoi aku ka maikaʻi o ka hoʻololi ʻana i nā huaʻōlelo ʻelua me kahi huaʻōlelo ikaika. E nānā ma lalo:

Ua hilahila loa ka mea paʻi kiʻi i kona ʻike ʻana ua poina ʻo ia i kāna pākaukau.
Ua hoʻomāʻewaʻewa ka mea paʻi kiʻi i kona ʻike ʻana ua poina ʻo ia i kāna pākaukau.

He makani anu loa e pa ana.
He hau ka makani.

Ua hauʻoli au i ke kiʻi ʻana i kēia ʻohana nani loa i kēia lā.
Ua hauʻoli au i ke kiʻi ʻana i kēia ʻohana nani i kēia lā.

E nānā i kāu hōʻailona a me ka grammar

Ua hoʻohana ʻoe apostrophe pololei? Ua pololei anei kāu kaha kikoʻī, a kōkua anei ia e hoʻomaopopo i kou manaʻo?

Heluhelu hope.

Pololei kēnā. Ihope. ʻOiaʻiʻo, ʻaʻole e holo kēia ʻenehana inā kākau ʻoe i kahi moʻolelo, akā no kahi pou blog pōkole a i ʻole kahi ʻāpana hoʻolaha heluhelu mai ka hopena a hiki i ka hoʻomaka ke kōkua iā ʻoe e ʻike i nā typos a me nā hewa ʻōlelo. No ke aha mai? ʻAe, no ka mea, ʻo ka heluhelu ʻana i hope ke hoʻōki i kou manaʻo e hana i kēlā 'mea wānana' kahi āu e heluhelu ai i kāu mea manao aia ma ka ʻaoʻao. ʻO ka wānana he akamai kūpono i ka heluhelu ola maoli. Kōkua ia iā mākou e heluhelu maʻalahi. I ka nānā ʻana i nā typos, akā naʻe, hiki i ka heluhelu maʻalahi ke hoʻoneʻe iā mākou i nā hewa. Ke heluhelu ʻoe i hope, ua kū ʻia kāu heluhelu a nānā ʻoe i kēlā me kēia huaʻōlelo. E ho'āʻo.

E heluhelu i kāu hana ma mua o kou paʻi ʻana

Ke nānā ʻoe i kāu hana iā ʻoe iho, e noi i kahi hoaaloha hilinaʻi e heluhelu iā ia i ka manawa hope loa. E like me ka nui o ʻoukou, ʻo koʻu manawa kākau i ka pō, ma hope o ka moe ʻana o nā keiki, pau nā kīʻaha, paʻa nā ʻaina awakea, a holoi ʻia nā noho, no laila ʻike wau ʻaʻole hiki i kekahi ke heluhelu i kāu hana ma mua o kou paʻi ʻana. 'hoolaha'. Ke kākau mākou i ka pō, ʻoi aku ka nui o ka pilikia ma mua o ka maʻamau o ka nalo ʻana i nā hewa maʻalahi. Inā hiki iā ʻoe ke loaʻa i nā poʻe nāna e hoʻoponopono hou iā ʻoe, e hoʻohana iā lākou. Hiki paha iā ʻoe ke hui pū me kekahi mea kākau moʻomanaʻo blog a pane hou aku. Maopopo iaʻu wordpress i kēia manawa he ala e waiho ai i kahi kikoʻī no ka loiloi e nā mea kākau wordpress ʻē aʻe. He ʻauʻau nui kēlā o ke kālena kākau e noi wale ana e hoʻohana ʻia!

He mea koʻikoʻi loa ka heluhelu ʻana o nā maka ʻē aʻe i kāu hana inā manaʻo ʻoe e kuhi hewa paha nā kānaka i ka manaʻo ma hope o kāu ʻāpana. He hoaaloha pili koʻu i heluhelu i kahi pou ma koʻu ʻike ma ke ʻano he makuahine kula hou no ka mea, ʻoiai I manaʻo he ʻakaʻaka iaʻu, hopohopo paha au he haʻahaʻa loa ia i nā makuahine ʻē aʻe o ke kula.

ʻO ka hapa nui o ka poʻe e kala aku i ka typo ʻino ma kāu blog a i ʻole kāu ʻaoʻao facebook (ma hope o nā mea a pau, ʻo wai ka mea i manaʻo ʻo 'gr8' kahi huaʻōlelo ʻae ʻia o ka 'nui'?). ʻo ia nui, akā naʻe, e heluhelu i kekahi i nā mea āu e paʻi nei i paʻi ʻia, e like me nā papa kuhikuhi kumu kūʻai, alakai i na mea e aahu ai a me na mea like. He hoaaloha koʻu e hōʻole ʻole e ʻai i loko o ka hale ʻaina inā he hewa i kāna papa kuhikuhi. "Pehea lākou e mālama ai i kaʻu meaʻai," i kahaha ai ʻo ia, "inā ʻaʻole hiki iā lākou ke hoʻopilikia i ka hoʻokō pono ʻana i kā lākou papa ʻai?" Makemake wau iā ʻoe e haʻalele i kahi manawa e hana pū ai me kahi mea kūʻai aku no ka mea aia kahi apostrophe ma kahi o kāu mau ʻāpana hoʻolaha.

E hoʻomanaʻo, "ʻaʻohe palapala nui, kākau hou maikaʻi wale nō" (Justice Brandeis). E ʻoliʻoli nui kāu blogs, pūnaewele, a me nā nūhou i kaomi ʻana i kāu poʻe heluhelu i ka "kaʻana like" e like me kāu kaomi ʻana i ka "publish". Hauʻoli kākau!

ʻO Jennifer Taylor kahi keiki a Sydney a me ka mea paʻi kiʻi ʻohana nāna i hoʻopaʻa i ka PhD ma ka Hoʻomohala Kula Kamaliʻi i loea i ka hoʻomohala heluhelu a me ka bilingualism. Ke kiʻi ʻole ʻo ia i nā kiʻi, hoʻolilo manawa me kona ʻohana a i ʻole ke aʻo ʻana iā yoga, hiki ke ʻike ʻia ʻo ia e kū ana ma waho o nā puka aniani o nā mea waiwai, peni ʻulaʻula i ka lima.