ʻO ka Holiday Disaster - Award Winning Story na Ellie Friedman, makahiki 8

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ʻO kekahi o nā manawa haʻaheo i hiki i ka makuahine ke nānā ʻo ia i kāna kaikamahine e kiʻi i kāna mau moemoeā - a hoʻokō ʻo ia iā lākou. ʻO kekahi o kaʻu mau kaikamahine māhoe, ʻo Ellie, e moeʻuhane nei no ka lilo ʻana i mea kākau i kona wā makua. ʻIke ʻo ia i ke kākau ʻana a me ke kiʻi ʻana i nā puke a nā keiki, nā moʻolelo non-fiction, a me nā moʻolelo fiction. Inā ʻaʻole ʻo ia i kanu ʻia i loko o kahi heluhelu puke, aia kāna peni i waho a ke kākau nei ʻo ia. Nui ka makemake o Ellie i ka huaʻōlelo i kākau ʻia.

ʻO kēia kauwela, ʻoiai e heluhelu ana Ka Nūpepa kaikamahine ʻAmelika, ua ʻike ʻo ia i kahi hoʻokūkū moʻolelo. I mea e komo ai, ua kuhikuhi ʻia i nā keiki e kākau i kahi moʻolelo no ka lā nui e hoʻopuni ai i kēia kiʻi.

AG-kiʻi Ka Lā Hoʻomaha Holiday - ʻO ka moʻolelo lanakila ma o Ellie Friedman, nā makahiki 8 MCP Nā hana a ka MCP Manaʻo MCP

E hoʻouna i kāu ʻatikala i loko, kali, a ʻaʻole paha lohe hou no ka mea e lana ana ia i loko o kahi puʻupuʻu me nā haneli a me nā tausani o nā poʻe ʻē aʻe. Akā he manaʻo ko ʻEllie. Ua noʻonoʻo ʻo ia i moʻolelo ma kona poʻo, a laila kau ʻo ia i ka peni i ka pepa. Ua kākau a kākau ʻo ia. A laila ua kōkua au iā ia e kikokiko i kāna mau huaʻōlelo. Lick mākou i ka envelope. A kali mākou.

Ma ke ʻano he makua, makemake au e kiʻi ʻo ia i kāna mau moeʻuhane akā makemake wau e pale iā ia mai ka hoka. Pololei a hewa paha, paʻakikī e ʻike i kāu keiki leʻaleʻa a i ʻole hoʻonāwaliwali. ʻIke i kēlā Ka Nūpepa Kaikamahine ʻAmelika ʻaʻole paha e heluhelu i nā mea komo āpau, a ke ʻike nei ʻo 8 wale nō ia, a ʻo ka hapa nui o ka poʻe e komo i loko ua ʻelemakule loa, ua haʻi wau iā ia, "Kupaianaha kāu moʻolelo. A inā ʻaʻole e lanakila, e ʻike ʻia e kaʻu poʻe heluhelu blog. ” Nānā ʻo ia a me aʻu a wehewehe, "Makemake wau e kākau. Inā ʻaʻole wau e lanakila, ua maikaʻi. ʻAʻole wau e ʻike inā ʻaʻole wau e hoʻouna. ”

ʻO ka wikiwiki i ʻOkakopa ... Loaʻa mākou i kahi envelop mai Ka Nūpepa kaikamahine ʻAmelika - ka nui āu e loaʻa ai ke ʻae ʻia i ke koleke, kahi envelop keʻokeʻo nui. ʻAʻole wau e poina i ka helehelena o ka helehelena o Ellie, ka pīhoihoi i kahe i loko o kona kino, a ʻoiaʻiʻo hoʻi ma o koʻu pū, ke heluhelu mākou i ka leka, nānā ʻia iā ʻoe ma lalo nei.

AG-leka ʻO ka Holiday Disaster - Award Winning Story na Ellie Friedman, Nā makahiki 8 MCP Nā Hana Hana Kumu MCP ManaʻoKe lele nei i luna a i lalo, huli mākou i ka ʻaoʻao 39. Ua ʻike mākou i kona pūlima. "Ellie - makahiki 8, Michigan" - WOW !!! Ua hana ʻo ia! ʻOiai ʻo 2 wale nō nā mea lanakila nui i paʻi ʻia, nā makahiki 14, ʻo ia ka muli loa o ka 6 e loaʻa i kahi Mea Hoʻohanohano.

AG-pūlima ʻO ka Hoʻomaha Hoʻomaha - Hoʻohālikelike Hoʻohanohano e Ellie Friedman, Nā Manaʻo ʻOihana MCP Nā Manaʻo MCP Manaʻo MCP

Ua paʻi ʻia kona inoa. ʻO ia, ma 8 mau makahiki, ua ʻike ʻia no kāna kākau ʻana. ʻIke ʻo ia hiki iā ʻoe ke hoʻokō i kekahi mea āna e hoʻonohonoho ai - ʻoiai ʻo ia e hoʻāʻo. Nanea i ka heluhelu ʻana i kāna moʻolelo wā hoʻomaha.

E ʻoluʻolu e waiho i kahi ʻōlelo nona e hōʻike iā ia i kou manaʻo! Makemake pū kekahi iā ia inā ʻoe e kaʻana like i ka moʻolelo, a hoʻolaha i ka ʻōlelo i kāu mau hoaaloha a ʻohana. Mahalo.


ʻO ka pōʻino Holiday Na Ellie Friedman

ʻAʻole hiki iā Emily ke kali a hiki i kāna pāʻina hoʻomaha. Hoʻolālā ʻo ia i nā hana he nui. ʻOi aku, ʻaʻole hiki iā ia ke kali a hiki i kēia manawa. Koho ʻo kāna hoa aloha ʻo Megan i nā makana maikaʻi loa. I kēia manawa, hāpai ʻo Emily i kā Megan makana i wahī nani ʻia. Ke nakinaki nei ʻo Megan i kona kāmaʻa, no laila ʻaʻole hiki iā ia ke ʻike iā Emily e wehe ana i ka makana. Akā hiki iā ia ke lohe mau i ka pīhoihoi.

"Auē," hāwele ʻo Emily i kona poʻo. ʻO ka makana he "Green Slime Mania." ʻAʻole anei kēlā no nā keiki kāne? "Mahalo" wahi a Emily. Makemake ʻo ia e hauʻoli loa ʻo Megan. Ma hope ua pāʻani lākou i nā pāʻani, akā ʻaʻole hiki iā Emily ke nānā aku. E noʻonoʻo ana ʻo ia i ka maikaʻi ʻole o kēia manawa. ʻOiai ke pāʻani nei lākou i ka lipine ma ka pahu makana, ʻaʻole hiki iā ia ke noʻonoʻo. ʻO kēlā me kēia lā e nīnau aku ke kaikaina o Emily ʻo Andrew, "Hiki iaʻu ke loaʻa i ka Green Slime Mania?" I kēlā me kēia manawa i pane aku ʻo Emily, "ʻAʻole, malia paha ua hana hewa ʻo Megan. Ma waho aʻe, e hoʻi ana au i kēia pule aʻe, i ka lā ma hope o ke Kalikimaka. "ʻAʻole," i wili ai ʻo Andrew.

Ua ʻae ʻo Megan lāua ʻo Emily e pilau nā keiki kāne. He kaikuaʻana ʻo Megan ʻo Kyle. Ma ka Pōʻakahi, kāhea ʻo Megan iā Emily a nīnau, "makemake ʻoe e pāʻani?" ʻAʻole makemake ʻo Emily no ka mea makaʻu ʻo ia e lawe i kēia manawa i kahi kamaʻilio. No laila pane ʻo ia, "E kala mai iaʻu e hana i kaʻu mau hana."

Ma ka Poalua hele mai ʻo Megan i ka hale o Emily. Ua wili nani ka lauoho ʻalani o Megan a ʻōlapa ʻia kona lole ʻulaʻula ʻulaʻula. Ua haki ʻo ia i ka puka. Ua lohe ʻo Megan iā Emily e kamaʻilio pū ana me kona mau mākua. "Ua inaina loa wau i ka makana a Megan i hāʻawi mai ai iaʻu. ʻO nā mea aʻu e makemake ai he pēpē Girl ʻAmelika, kahi pahu hoʻoliʻiliʻi lauoho, a me nā puke pohihihi Girl Girl ʻAmelika. A ua loaʻa iaʻu ka pahu hoʻoliʻiliʻi lauoho na Ashley. ”

ʻO Megan ma luna o kēia kamaʻilio a pīhoihoi ʻo ia. Pehea e hiki ai i kāna hoaaloha maikaʻi ke ʻōlelo pēlā? Ua holo wikiwiki ʻo Megan me ka waimaka i kona hale. I kekahi lā aʻe ma ke kula ʻaʻole i launa pū ʻo Megan me Emily. Ma kahi o ua kau pū ʻo ia me Ashley. Ua kau pū ʻo Emily me Laura.

Ma ke ala i ka home, ua hele ʻo Megan i kahi ala ʻokoʻa. No nā lā e pale aku nā kaikamahine i kekahi i kekahi. I ka lā ma mua o ke Kalikimaka, uē ʻo Megan. Ua pono ʻo ia e kamaʻilio me Emily. Ke manaʻo ʻino loa ʻo Emily.

ʻO ka Kalikimaka hope loa ia a ua kipa ʻo Emily iā Megan. "E Megan, ua hele mai wau e haʻi iā ʻoe, ʻaʻole wau makemake i ka makana i loaʻa iaʻu iaʻu i ka pāʻina nui." "Ua lohe wau. ʻIke akula wau ma ka puka a lohe wau iā ʻoe e haʻi ana i kou mau mākua. He aha kaʻu i hāʻawi aku ai iā ʻoe he weliweli loa? ” i nīnau aku ai ʻo Megan.

"ʻO Green Slime Mania" i pane aku ai ʻo Emily. "Auē!" ʻalalā ʻo Megan. "Hāʻawi wale wau i ka makana a koʻu hoahānau iā Kyle." Ua hele ʻo Megan a kiʻi iā Kyle a wehewehe i ka mea holoʻokoʻa. A laila ua kuapo ʻo Emily lāua ʻo Kyle i nā makana. "ʻAʻohe mea kupanaha i wehe wau i kahi pēpē kaikamahine ʻAmelika no kahi makana i kēia kakahiaka," wahi a Kyle. Ua ʻakaʻaka nā kānaka āpau. Ua hoʻomanaʻo ʻo Emily lāua ʻo Megan i kēia moʻolelo no kekahi manawa lōʻihi.

Hauʻoli lā hoʻomaha! KA HOPENA.

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  1. Wāhi ma ka lā 16 o Ianuali, 7 ma 2010: 9

    E kuʻu Gosh! .. He puaʻa kuʻi kaʻu e heluhelu nei i ka moʻolelo kamahaʻo a ʻEli! He mea kākau moʻolelo kupaianaha nō ia. ʻO Heck he mea kākau maikaʻi ʻo ia i kēia manawa. Hoʻomaikaʻi i kāu hana kūpaianaha i ka oʻo oʻo inā 8. E kiʻi i nā hōkū, ipo !!

  2. ʻO Tricia Nugen ma ka lā 16 o Ianuali, 7 ma 2010: 9

    ʻO OMG kahi hana kupaianaha. A, ua maʻalahi wau i ka haehae ʻana i ka manawa i hiki ai au i ka paukū 2. Hoʻomaikaʻi iā ʻolua! He hana nui kēia! 'Saylelo wau e uwa iā ia mai luna o luna.

  3. MelissaF ma ka lā 16 o Ianuali, 7 ma 2010: 9

    He moʻolelo maikaʻi loa a ʻoluʻolu hoʻi kona inoa i loko o ka makasina! He mea hoʻokō kēlā. Haʻaheo ʻo ia iā ia iho !! Ala e hele ai !!!

  4. Alli ma ka lā 16 o Ianuali, 7 ma 2010: 9

    Hiki iaʻu ke ʻike i ke kumu o kou haʻaheo iā ia! Kupaianaha ka moʻolelo a pono ʻo ia e hoʻomau i ka hoʻomaʻamaʻa ʻana i ka hana.

  5. Stephanie DeBolt ma ka lā 16 o Ianuali, 7 ma 2010: 9

    Ellie, CONGRATULATIONS! ʻO wau kahi mea kākau nūpepa a me ka mea paʻi kiʻi a pono wau e haʻi iā ʻoe i ka manawa MUA aʻu i ʻike ai i koʻu inoa i ka paʻi paʻi ua hele au i CRAZY a he 32 koʻu mau makahiki! ʻAʻole hiki iaʻu ke noʻonoʻo i kou pīhoihoi! ʻO ke kumu o koʻu ʻelemakule makua no ka mea ʻaʻole wau i hoʻolohe i koʻu leo ​​i koʻu wā o kou mau makahiki, e haʻi ana iaʻu i ke kākau ʻana a me ke kiʻi ʻana i nā kiʻi e hauʻoli loa ai wau. Ua loaʻa iaʻu kahi hana maʻamau (luʻuluʻu loa) a hele i ka hana. I kekahi mau makahiki ma hope mai ua lawe wau i kahi manawa a hele aku no ia, ka hana ma ka nūpepa, a i kēia manawa he poʻe e wehe i kāna ʻaoʻao e ʻike wale i ka mea aʻu i kākau ai ! Makemake wau e noʻonoʻo ma ka hana ʻana i ka mea aʻu e aloha ai, hoʻohauʻoli wau i ka poʻe. Maikaʻi loa ʻoe iā Ellie a noʻonoʻo i ka nui o nā poʻe āu e hauʻoli ai i kou wā e kākau nei i nā moʻolelo. Nui ka haʻaheo o kou makuahine iā ʻoe a ʻo ia e! Kupanaha loa ʻoe! E hoʻomau i ka alualu i kāu mau moemoeā a ʻaʻa e hoʻonui i ka nui a nui aʻe i kēlā me kēia manawa! Stephanie

  6. jen ma ka lā 16 o Ianuali, 7 ma 2010: 9

    Hoʻomaikaʻi iā Ellie! Kupaianaha kēlā. ʻAʻole hiki iaʻu ke kali e kaʻana like i kēia me kaʻu kaikamahine (ʻaneʻane ʻo 8 ona makahiki) makemake pū kekahi e lilo i mea kākau i ka wā makua a aloha pū ʻo ia i ke kaikamahine ʻAmelika. Ua hauʻoli pū wau i kāu moʻolelo.

  7. Kealaokuuleialoha ma ka lā 16 o Ianuali, 7 ma 2010: 9

    ALA E HELE ELLIE !!!!

  8. ʻO Denise Armbruster ma ka lā 16 o Ianuali, 7 ma 2010: 10

    Mahalo iā ʻoe Ellie, kupaianaha kāu moʻolelo. Nānā wau i mua i nā moʻolelo e hiki mai ana a ʻaʻole ia he mea e pīhoihoi ai iaʻu no ka hāʻawi ʻia ʻana o kahi kālena iā ʻoe he makuahine loea kou. Holo i loko o ka ʻohana. Ua heluhelu kaʻu kaikamahine i ka makasina Girl Girl no kekahi manawa lōʻihi. Loaʻa iā ia (ʻoiai ua mālama ʻia lākou) 3 mau pēpē, he tona o nā mea a me Bitty Baby āna i hāʻawi aloha ai i kāna neice e pāʻani pū. E hoʻomau i ke kākau ʻana, maopopo leʻa he ala me ka haʻi moʻolelo.

  9. ali ma ka lā 16 o Ianuali, 7 ma 2010: 10

    Ellie, hauʻoli !!! Maikaʻi kāu moʻolelo a naʻu e kaʻana like me kaʻu kaikamahine ponoʻī, ʻo ia kou mau makahiki, ke hoʻi mai ʻo ia mai ka hale mai ke kula. Pili wau e hoʻonāukiuki iā ia e hoʻomau i ka hoʻopili ʻana i kāna kākau ponoʻī!

  10. ʻO Yolanda ma ka lā 16 o Ianuali, 7 ma 2010: 10

    Ma ke ʻano he 8 mau makahiki ka mea i makemake i ka heluhelu a me ke kākau ʻana, a moeʻuhane i ka lā e hoʻolaha ʻia kaʻu kākau ʻana, e hāwanawana ana kuʻu puʻuwai no ka mea hanohano a ʻEliela i ʻōlelo ai. He moʻolelo nani ia, me ka arc sophisticated loa a me ke kūpikipiki, a me kahi hopena hōʻoluʻolu & ʻoluʻolu. Aia kekahi mau haumāna papa ʻekolu i hiki ke kākau i kēlā (a he nui nā mākua i hiki ʻole ke hana i kahi ʻoi aku ka maikaʻi). Hoʻomaikaʻi, Ellie! ʻAʻole hiki iaʻu ke kali e ʻike i kahi e lele aʻe ai kāu mau hua ʻōlelo ma hope.

  11. INGRID ma ka lā 16 o Ianuali, 7 ma 2010: 11

    Kupaianaha kēlā! ʻO kekahi o kaʻu mau keikikāne māhoe kahi mea kākau lanakila pū kekahi. Ua lanakila ʻo ia i kekahi mau hoʻokūkū. ʻO kekahi o ia mau wahi ʻelua mai nā haumāna papa 2th mai kahi ʻekolu mokuʻāina ma FL. Ua hoʻohana ʻia kēlā ʻāpana o ke kākau ʻana i kahi hana ʻoihana e kau ʻia e kahi ʻoihana keaka kūloko. Minamina ʻaʻohe ona makemake e lilo i mea kākau. ʻAʻole loa ʻo ia e komo i kāna hana a nā kumu e hoʻouna aku ai iā lākou. Nanea wale ʻo ia i ka hana ʻana i ke kākau lima ʻana i kāna papa Pelekane. Lana koʻu manaʻo e hoʻomau ʻo ʻEllie i ke kākau ʻana. E nānā ana wau i mua i ka heluhelu hou ʻana i kāna hana! ~ Ingrid

  12. Denise ma ka lā 16 o Ianuali, 7 ma 2010: 11

    Moʻolelo FABULOUS Ellie !!

  13. Kim ma ka lā 16 o Ianuali, 7 ma 2010: 11

    Ka moʻolelo weliweli Ellie! ʻO ka ʻike ʻana i kou inoa i ka paʻi no ka manawa mua he ʻike hoʻomanaʻo ʻole ia. Maikaʻi nou !! 🙂

  14. kukuna ma ka lāʻo Tesema 7, 2010 ma 12: 17 pm

    Hoʻomaikaʻi, Emily! Kupaianaha loa kāu moʻolelo. E hōʻike ana wau iā ia i kaʻu moʻopuna kāne 7 makahiki nona hoʻi kahi makemake e kākau. ʻIke wau e kahaha nui ʻo ia. E haʻaheo loa ʻoe iā ʻoe iho, ʻike wau haʻaheo wau iā ʻoe!

  15. Nicole ma ka lāʻo Tesema 7, 2010 ma 12: 17 pm

    E Ellie aloha, he momona loa kāu moʻolelo. Ua hoʻomau wau i ka kānalua a hiki i ka hopena! ʻO ʻoe he ipo wahine pōhaku! ʻAʻole hiki iaʻu ke hilinaʻi ma 8 ke kākau nei ʻoe i nā moʻolelo pōkole kānalua a ʻano pīhoihoi hoʻi. Hiki iā ʻoe ke hana i kāu mea e noʻonoʻo ai! Mai hoʻokuʻu i kekahi, manaʻo wau i kekahi e haʻi ʻē aʻe iā ʻoe. Eia hou, pōhaku ʻoe! Haʻaheo wau i ka heluhelu ʻana i kāu moʻolelo! ʻOiai he mea maoli, ʻo kaʻu kaikamahine liʻiliʻi, ʻo Layla Lu, ʻo ia ka 4, e kiʻi iā ia i kāna kaikamahine wahine ʻAmelika mua loa i kēia Kalikimaka. Pehea ka pīhoihoi ?! E kiʻi ʻia ana ʻo ia i ka makasina me kāu ʻatikala kahi i paʻi ʻia ai kāu moʻolelo. Manaʻo wau e mālama ʻo ia iā ia a mau loa aku. Mahalo no ka kaʻana like ʻana! Nicole

  16. ʻO Dawn Norris ma ka lāʻo Tesema 7, 2010 ma 12: 21 pm

    Ellie - haʻaheo loa ʻoe iā ʻoe iho. He nani ʻoe, kālena, mea kākau maikaʻi a kaikamahine ʻē hoʻi. E hoʻomau i ka hoʻomau !! E hele iā ELLIE! 🙂

  17. Isabel San Jose ma ka lāʻo Tesema 7, 2010 ma 12: 36 pm

    Aloha Jodi lāua ʻo Hi Ellie! ʻO wau kahi mea kūʻai aku a me ka peʻa a kou Māmā mai ke Philippines āpau. I kēia manawa ʻo wau kou peʻahi pū kekahi. Mahalo no kēia mea i hiki ai, he lā ʻōpio e hiki mai ana i mua. E hoʻomau E aloha pū iā ʻoe e Jodi. He kaikamahine nō hoʻi kaʻu a maopopo maoli iaʻu ka hauʻoli o kēia kūleʻa āna i hana ai. A i ke kakahiaka nui o kona ola. No laila hauʻoli ʻoe. Hauʻoli lā hoʻomaha!

  18. ʻO Kristi C ma ka lāʻo Tesema 7, 2010 ma 12: 51 pm

    He moʻolelo kupaianaha nō! Hiki iaʻu ke kiʻi i nā mea āpau i koʻu poʻo! E hoʻomau i ke kākau ʻana, makemake wau e ʻike i ka mea a Emily lāua ʻo Megan e komo aʻe ai!

  19. Pamey ma ka lāʻo Tesema 7, 2010 ma 12: 57 pm

    Ellie, mahalo i kahi moʻolelo maikaʻi. E heluhelu wau me kaʻu kaikamahine i kēia hopena pule ke ʻike wau iā ia. He hana kupaianaha kēia! E hoʻomau i ka hana nui. E ʻimi au i kou inoa i ka wā e hiki mai ana.

  20. ʻO Christy aka Mamarazzi ma ka lāʻo Tesema 7, 2010 ma 1: 08 pm

    Wow, he moʻolelo weliweli kēlā! He mea kākau talena ʻo Ellie i ka hana ʻana! ʻO Bravo Ellie !!!! Mahalo, e hoʻomau i ka hana maikaʻi!

  21. Kasey ma ka lāʻo Tesema 7, 2010 ma 2: 53 pm

    ʻO kahi moʻolelo maikaʻi loa a me kālena no ke kākau ʻana! Hoʻomaikaʻi !!! ʻAʻohe moeʻuhane e nui. Pehea pīhoihoi !!

  22. Keliʻi V ma ka lāʻo Tesema 7, 2010 ma 2: 54 pm

    Mahalo nui loa iā Miss Ellie! Maikaʻi kāu moʻolelo! Aloha wau iā ʻoe e hoʻoluhi i ke koʻikoʻi o ka kamaʻilio ʻana o kekahi me kekahi. E haʻaheo loa ʻoe iā ʻoe iho!

  23. Michelle ma ka lāʻo Tesema 7, 2010 ma 3: 40 pm

    Ellie, mahalo no ka hāʻawi ʻana mai i kēia moʻolelo puʻuwai me mākou ... ʻO wau kekahi o kāu mea pā hou loa. Mahalo pū kekahi i kāu makana mai ke Kaikamahine ʻAmelika. ʻIke wau i ka heluhelu ʻana i nā ʻatikala / moʻolelo hou mai iā ʻoe i kahi wā e hiki mai ana. Jodi, hiki iaʻu ke ʻike i kou hauʻoli no kāu kaikamahine ma o kāu pou. Mahalo no ka hāʻawi ʻana mai i kāna tālena iā mākou. Malia paha e loaʻa iā Ellie i kahi pou mahina ma kāu blog e hoʻomau me kāna moʻolelo kupaianaha. Makemake au e hoʻolohe hou aku e pili ana i ka hanana o kēia mau hoa ʻelua. : DMichelle

  24. Breanne ma ka lāʻo Tesema 7, 2010 ma 4: 03 pm

    Hoʻomaikaʻi iā Ellie! He hana kupaianaha kēia! Aloha au i kāu moʻolelo. 🙂

  25. Aina I ma ka lāʻo Tesema 7, 2010 ma 5: 27 pm

    ʻEli, ua heluhelu wale wau i kāu moʻolelo i kaʻu makahiki 7 i aloha iā ia he pēpē AG pū kekahi, a aloha ʻo ia i kāu moʻolelo. He hana maikaʻi loa kāu i pili ai i ke kiʻi, A manaʻo mākou he kūpono kūpono ia no ka makasina AG !! Mahalo i kāu hoʻokō !! E hoʻomau i ke kī ʻana no kēlā mau hōkū! -Ginger (a me Maggie)

  26. ʻO Sandi ma ka lāʻo Tesema 7, 2010 ma 5: 27 pm

    Aloha Ellie, Pōmaikaʻi! He moʻolelo kupaianaha nō! E heluhelu ana wau i kaʻu poʻe keiki i kēia pō ma mua o ko lākou hiamoe ʻana. ʻIke wau e aloha lākou iā ia! Oh a e hōʻike wale aku iā ʻoe, ke heluhelu nei mākou i kāu moʻolelo maikaʻi a puni ma aneʻi ma Australia! 🙂

  27. Krista ma ka lāʻo Tesema 7, 2010 ma 5: 44 pm

    Hoʻomaikaʻi, Ellie! He hana kupaianaha kēia. E haʻaheo loa ʻoe iā ʻoe iho. PS Kākau ʻoe ma mua o kekahi mau haumāna o ke koleke aʻu i ʻike ai.

  28. ʻO Dawn ma ka lāʻo Tesema 7, 2010 ma 5: 49 pm

    ʻO wau he kumu kula kiʻekiʻe a kaumaha nui kaʻu mau haumāna e paio nei e kākau e like me kāu kākau ʻana. E hoʻomau i ka hiki i nā hōkū! I kekahi lā maopopo nō wau e ʻike wau i kou inoa ma ka papa inoa ʻoi loa o ka mea kūʻai aku ʻo NY Times.

  29. Kanani ma ka lāʻo Tesema 7, 2010 ma 6: 45 pm

    Hoʻomaikaʻi iā Ellie! He moʻolelo maikaʻi loa ia a he manawa mālamalama nāu a me kou ʻohana. ʻO ka moʻolelo āu i kākau ai kahi mea aʻu e lana ai ka manaʻo e hiki i nā keiki ke aʻo mai, e kamaʻilio pinepine ana i nā pilikia i maʻalahi pinepine e hoʻoponopono hewa. E hoʻomau i ka hiki i kāu mau moeʻuhane a hoʻomau i ke kākau ʻana.

  30. Anastasia ma ka lāʻo Tesema 7, 2010 ma 7: 58 pm

    Mahalo nui! He manaʻo maikaʻi loa ka ʻike ʻana i kāu poʻe keiki e kūleʻa a ʻike i ko lākou pīhoihoi ... A no ka makuahine ʻaʻohe mea ʻahu ma mua o ka minoʻaka o kāna pēpē! He moʻolelo maikaʻi loa ia, makemake wau!

  31. ʻO Tara S. ma ka lāʻo Tesema 7, 2010 ma 8: 10 pm

    No laila maikaʻi loa, Ellie! Mahalo nui!

  32. ia ma ka lāʻo Tesema 7, 2010 ma 8: 23 pm

    ʻO 8 wale nō ʻoe ?? Kupaianaha kēia, kupaianaha maoli nō !!! E hoʻomau i ka hana ʻana no ka mea he talena kāu !!! He moʻolelo maikaʻi loa !!

  33. ʻO Michelle Davies ma ka lāʻo Tesema 7, 2010 ma 8: 45 pm

    He hana kupaianaha kēia! Makemake au i kāu moʻolelo. E hoʻomau i ka hana maikaʻi.

  34. Wahi ma ka lāʻo Tesema 7, 2010 ma 9: 16 pm

    Hoʻomaikaʻi Ellie !!! He moʻolelo maikaʻi loa ia! ʻAʻole hiki iaʻu ke kali e kaʻana like me kaʻu mau kaikamahine. ʻO lākou he 6 a 10 mau makahiki a ALOHA ʻO ke kaikamahine ʻAmelika kekahi. Ala e hele ai !!! 🙂

  35. Connye Hiracheta ma ka lāʻo Tesema 7, 2010 ma 9: 58 pm

    Kupaianaha !!!! ʻO ʻoe kekahi wahine ʻōpio loea !!!

  36. Lisa ma ka lāʻo Tesema 7, 2010 ma 10: 08 pm

    Kupaianaha wale kēlā. Nani ka haʻaheo a me ke akamai o kāu kaikamahine! Lana koʻu manaʻo ua hoʻomanaʻo ʻo ia i ka manawa o ka loaʻa ʻana o kēlā envelope no ke koena o kona ola.

  37. Tamara ma ka lāʻo Tesema 7, 2010 ma 11: 18 pm

    Ka moʻolelo kupaianaha ʻo Ellie. Ua hauʻoli nui kaʻu mau kaikamahine ʻo Claire lāua ʻo Grace i ka hoʻolohe ʻana i kāu moʻolelo. ʻAʻole hiki iā mākou ke kali e lohe i kekahi o kāu mau moʻolelo !!

  38. ʻO Sarah BR ma ka lāʻo Tesema 7, 2010 ma 11: 43 pm

    Mahalo nui! He moʻolelo nani, kākau maikaʻi ʻia!

  39. Kristie ma ka lā 16 o Ianuali, 8 ma 2010: 12

    ʻEli, he hana kupaianaha āu i hana ai i kāu moʻolelo… a pehea kou akamai i hoʻopaʻa ai me nā pēpē Girl ʻAmelika. maikaʻi loa !! E hoʻomau i ka hana maikaʻi!

  40. Brad ma ka lāʻo Tesema 8, 2010 ma 4: 28 pm

    Hoʻomaikaʻi, Ellie! Maikaʻi loa ia !!! E ʻike ʻoe i kou inoa i ka paʻi ma mua o ka lōʻihi.

  41. Lisa ma ka lāʻo Tesema 8, 2010 ma 11: 35 pm

    He moʻolelo kupaianaha loa ʻo ʻEsai. A kahi hoʻokō nui. He kālena kupaianaha kou a me kahi noʻonoʻo hana ... e hana mau ~ ʻoiai ʻoe e peʻe ma lalo o kou uhi me kahi ipukukui i ʻike ʻole kou makuahine ua ala ʻoe; 0)

  42. ʻO Tracy Smith ma ka lā 16 o Ianuali, 9 ma 2010: 12

    Ellie - he ʻoiaʻiʻo kāu moʻolelo. Hiki iaʻu ke noʻonoʻo e hana ana e like me kāu i kākau ai. ʻO kāu kākau ʻana iaʻu e like me ka pololei ma laila e nānā ana i nā mea āpau. He mea kākau maikaʻi ʻoe a lana koʻu manaʻo e kākau mau ʻoe. Nui nā mea i kou manaʻo a me kou puʻuwai! Ua ʻike anei ʻoe i kāu makana no nā ʻōlelo mai ke Akua mai? Hana ʻo ia iā ʻoe i mea kūikawā a ʻaʻohe mea e like me ʻoe. Aloha au i kāna hāʻawi ʻana iā ʻoe i ke aloha no ke kākau ʻana. E kākau paha ʻoe e pili ana iā ia i kekahi lā. He ʻelua mau kaikamahine aʻu. ʻO 9 ka mea kahiko loa a heluhelu nui ʻo ia a hauʻoli hoʻi i ke kākau ʻana. Makemake ʻo ia e kākau i nā moʻolelo e pili ana i nā kaikamahine a me nā kamaʻilio a leʻaleʻa i ka hoihoi ʻana. Hoʻāʻo ʻo ia e loaʻa kahi ala e makemake ai kāna mea heluhelu e heluhelu hou. He pēpē Girl ʻAmelika ʻo ia. E ʻĀ »« ʻo ia i kāu moʻolelo. Makemake au e ʻike inā ʻoe i manaʻo e kākau hou aʻe i kāu moʻolelo. ʻO nā huakaʻi hou aku o Megan lāua ʻo Emily. E heluhelu hou aʻe wau inā ʻoe i kākau hou. ʻO kāu mea aloha, Mrs. Smith (Mom iā Rachel lāua me Emily)

  43. ʻO Erin B ma ka lā 16 o Ianuali, 9 ma 2010: 1

    Ua hauʻoli loa wau i kāu moʻolelo, Ellie! Ua hoʻihoʻi iaʻu i ka wā aʻu he kaikamahine liʻiliʻi! Hoʻomaikaʻi i kou hanohano ... pono maoli nō ʻoe!

  44. Lisa ma ka lāʻo Tesema 9, 2010 ma 11: 09 pm

    Ua ʻike wau i ka maka maka hāliʻi e heluhelu ana i kāu leka a me ka moʻolelo ʻo Ellie !!! He aha ka ʻike maʻemaʻe! He kālena kupaianaha kāu e kaʻana aku ai iā haʻi !!!

  45. Angela ma ka lā 16 o Ianuali, 12 ma 2010: 1

    Ke ala e hele ai ʻo Ellie !! ʻOihana nui - he moʻolelo kupaianaha nō!

  46. Mele Kalikimaka ma ka lā 16 o Ianuali, 14 ma 2010: 12

    ʻO ka moʻolelo maikaʻi Ellie! Ala e hele ai! Manaʻo wau ua hana ʻoe i kahi hana weliweli. ʻAʻole hiki ke kali e kūʻai i kāu puke mua!

  47. lana ka manaʻo ma ka lāʻo Tesema 22, 2010 ma 2: 05 pm

    ua aloha mākou i kāu moʻolelo, Ellie! ʻO kaʻu kaikamahine, ʻo Ellie (9), a ua heluhelu wale wau ia, me ke kaikaina o Ellie, ʻo Ruby (3). He mākau kākau a haʻi moʻolelo maikaʻi loa ʻoe excellent

  48. Mireya ma Ianuali 7, 2011 ma 6: 33 pm

    Congrats Ellie, a ʻo ʻoe hoʻi ʻo Jodi! Ua aloha au i kāu moʻolelo Ellie, he hopena maikaʻi loa kāna !!

  49. MS. Maria ma Ianuali 8, 2011 ma 6: 10 pm

    Aloha i kāu moʻolelo, E hoʻomau i ka hana maikaʻi

  50. ʻO Mary Beth McGrew ma Ianuali 23, 2011 ma 5: 35 pm

    Iā Ellie, aloha au i kāu moʻolelo. He mea kupaianaha iaʻu he 8 ou mau makahiki a kākau maikaʻi loa. Aloha au i kāu moʻolelo i kahi aʻo maikaʻi i ka haʻi ʻana i ka ʻoiaʻiʻo a me ka lilo ʻana i hoa aloha. Mahalo i kāu hoʻokō ʻana a hoʻomau i ka hana maikaʻi. Hiki iā ʻoe ke hoʻokō i kāu mau moeʻuhane ke hāʻawi ʻole ʻoe. Nā hoʻomaikaʻi iā ʻoe a me kou ʻohana mai Kansas!

  51. Monika ma ka lāʻo Pepeluali 9, 2011 ma 12: 56

    Hoʻomaikaʻi, Ellie! E haʻaheo loa ʻoe iā ʻoe iho no kēia hana kupaianaha. He mea weliweli ia iā ʻoe e ʻike i kāu mea e makemake ai e hana ma 8 mau makahiki, a e hoʻomaka e hana !! He laʻana maikaʻi loa ʻoe i nā kaikamahine o nā makahiki KULA — a ʻo kēia “kaikamahine” 47 paha !!

  52. Suzanne ma ka lā Xune 25, 2011 ma 11: 57

    Hoʻomaikaʻi i ka moʻolelo nui! E like me ka leka i ʻōlelo ʻia, “E kākau mau!”

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